For all incredibly gifted poets please read ... What do you think??
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June 13, 2007 * Working Alone on my last entry wishing I could be more willing to accept what I got and letting go of what I was not. emotional roller coaster to hit the positive and negative in my mind what the world is this? Blind. Commit once again I do not want to see the end of failure has its grip on me for not wanting to let go. I drench my clothes in all the pain I have caused to many people in vain. I release all my fears and wiped most of my tears, but once again I am compelled to feel my life is not where he wants to be. just day-night fall and I'm always lost in a world of mist. Blanketing my mind and my soul I have to keep twisting. Desperate shame and I walked away both now I have no reason to stay or run all over the light leak.
Hello ...! In reply to your request, I read your piece ... Em, I hope you do not mind the critism, but I think you need more structure. It is undoubtedly harsh, I hope not, and certainly do not intend offense, but,,,, (deep breath ...) I broken and rearranged your room slightly (!) There were some parts that I felt needed editing so I went for it. I tried to maintain the overall integrity I felt you expected. I really hope you like it ... Alone. Working on my last Entry Wishing I could be more willing to accept what I got and letting go of what I have no emotional roller coaster ride of positive more negative sides clash in my mind crossed in my mind that the world is this? Blind. Blind. Commit once again I do not want To not see the end of the fault has its hold on me And do not lose that right for free. I drench my clothes in all the pain I have caused many, mostly in vain that I tried to let go of all my fears and wiped, most, my tears But again, I am obliged feel my life is not where he wants to be. Day comes, the night will fall and I'm lost in a world of always fog. Blanketing my mind and my soul twist No more, no more, I have to take. Despair, shame, I walked once away Now I have, no place to stay or to test all the light no longer shone.
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